Hi Patricia, These are definitely stories that children would enjoy and get a lot of: anything that provokes a discussion is enjoyed! But there needs to be a thorough edit done, just in terms of ironing out punctuation. The first sentence, for example, could be ironed out into two simple sentence... view book

Hi Linda, I love your opening paragraph: it's got such a sense of calm and peace to it. This sense carries through the remainder of the opening chapter, with the sense of ultra-realistic action painted by a distinct prose-voice. It's almost like oral storytelling, I thought, with the everyday sho... view book

Hi Katherine, Your prose has a distinct voice, evoking the era of which you write perfectly. It's a homey sort of voice, one that means the reader is instantly transported there. It's very lovely. It all has a distinctly literary feel :) Oh, and the enigmatic title is fantastic, too! Well don... view book

Hey, Groaner :) I like your version of Genesis way better than the original. Oh, and the rest of it is a great read as well! I don't have much more to add, 'cos I'm still grinning like an idiot after reading this. Victoria 'Daisy Dragonfly.' view book

Hi James, I adore this heightened sort of prose :) It has a definite aesthetic and wicked gleam to every punctuation point. Great fun. Victoria 'Daisy Dragonfly.' view book