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The Apricot Turner

James Steven LaMattery

A '70's draft dodger seeking an idyllic war-free life finds no safe haven in Old Time Religion. Should this rebel's asylum be Hell? True story.


Jim, an eighteen year old farm-hand, is forced to make the most important decision in his life. If he stays on the farm, he’ll be drafted into the Vietnam War. To avoid the draft, he can enroll into college, but rejects both alternatives as arranged marriages. Unexpectedly fired, he takes it as a sign to hit the road. Hitchhiking out of his small town, he is optimistic about what life has to offer, but leaving means losing the family he loves.

He meets a beautiful girl who lives in a commune of unorthodox Christians holed up in an abandoned hotel. He falls in love with Tabitha and finds her cohorts are kindred soul-mates who’ve refused to go down with the system’s shipwreck. He joins their mutiny from the world to take on a spiritual life.

Life is good—he marries and fathers a child. At first an egalitarian’s dream, he suspects his compatriots’ mission is being hijacked by their prophet, a self-styled guru, who’s errant genius and predatory sexuality forces the group’s attractive women into using sex to lure new members and swell the ranks with children.

Paradise is lost and Jim wants out, but it can cost him his soul.

 

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I wrote 1046 days ago

S- Just began reading this. I saw Poppet was commenting on it and I came over for a gander. I like this, reminds me much of the use of heat and sweat in my work, TAT.- I'll keep reading. J view book

I wrote 1065 days ago

M- You've done well giving the dialogue needed for each character.(I've now read through chp 9) I know they will all coalesce eventually as the story progresses. So, when you've posted the remaining chps- please send me a message, as now I have time invested in them (not wasted time, that's for sure... view book

I wrote 1065 days ago

Reading chp 6, I think you'll appreciate TAT, in that being poor and 'Spiritual' doesn't necessarily make a person different that being rich and 'Spiritual."--As your character Jeremiah aptly says, 'a specific demarcation was needed.' I like how you've demonstrated that Jeremiah's depression is a... view book

I wrote 1065 days ago

As I read chp 2, I'm reminded of the line in TAT, where Jim sees the commune for the first time: "I fall in love with the austerity of the building. Its no church, no Taj Mahal. No grandiose facade that begs a collection plate to hold it together!" This is looking good, I'm off to chp 3.-J view book

I wrote 1065 days ago

Check your added word in the line 'Andy again said told me' I'm not picking on you, just thought you'd like it to read correctly. So, I'm now at a loss (loss of further chaps) so get busy and post them! You've developed some great characters, like Derrick, but I hope this isn't distracting from... view book

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