I've backed you but have too much to read. I hope it's enought to tip you over the top. all the best Geoff. view book

Hi Jo I’ve only just got round to reading more of your book. Sorry about the delay but I was wading through a monster tome. At the start of chapter two, I got a bit confused as to whose house was sold and which funeral you were talking about. I worked it out quite quickly. It is only a minor probl... view book

Hi I hope you don’t mind if I suggest something, but in chapter three where the count goes off to uni, I felt that a single line at the end of the paragraph was missing. I would have finished with, - packed his bags for Cambridge University. It was three years before anyone at home missed him. Use... view book

Hi, it’s me again. I’ve got up to chapter 11 where I find a few things you should look at. ‘A chair scraped on the other side of the table….’ The rest of the sentence seemed a bit awkward. Try re-arranging the two sentences into one. ‘She was one of them sort of girls that was always whispering t... view book

A nice easy read which is good. It needs a few lines explaining that Cuthbert needed an assistant and that Percy has lost his hut so needs a job. At the end of ch 4, I didn't know whether Cuthbert was laughing or annoyed. In ch 5, I felt you could make show that she was getting the women on her s... view book