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Agricolus

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‘The Men Who Sold the World’ I started it at this year's NANO, but things have been tough and I had to shelve it to focus on work. But the idea was compelling to me - the David Bowie song "The Man Who Sold The World". This includes a subject I really enjoy writing about - Scottish history and the possibilities of alternative timelines. You might find it interesting.

My pic? I'm at the Maryland Renfest, with a kilt and a chain mail shirt I made, holding Connor, my first grandson

favourite books

"The Ancient Of Days"
"Point of Impact"
Michael Moorcock's "Elric of Melibone" series

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The Men who Sold the World

Gerry Torbert

Inquisitive siblings find their ancestory is wrought with disaster; they soon find a more sinster secret from afar, and a madman from the past.


Darren and Sonya use a powerful computer program to research their ancestry, soon discovering that their lines were terrorized by untimely death every few generations. A child in 14th Century Scotland finds an artifact from the sky that makes him worth bestowing of immortality. Now the siblings must find out who or what has been killing every other father for the last 650 years.

Aided by a powerful and sentient computer and a delightful couple from the edge of time, they discover the true source of the madness inflicting their ancestor--the Rolai, a race of galactic 'seeders' whose only faults are their own good intentions. Will it be too late to stave off an insane immortal? And will the cost of his prize be worth the Rolai's intervention?

 

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Melissa Writes wrote 34 days ago

Hi Gerry, Would you like to do a read swap? Thanks, Melissa

subra_2k123 wrote 34 days ago

Hi Agricolus, Do you like to have a glimpse of terrifying future, te....

The Knowledge wrote 37 days ago

Agricolus...please meet 'Madeline' David

patio wrote 39 days ago

I write with greetings and invitation to read a chapter or more of my....

Philthy wrote 58 days ago

Hi Agricolus, I was drawn to your pitches and wondered if you might ....

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I wrote 766 days ago

Diane - thanks for the time you took! SOOO....I confused you a little, eh? GOOD! (just kidding) Really, that's the way my mind works. Rather than set the stage forcibly (Here we are now in World War Two...) I decided to start right in on Iwo Jima, with two officers arguing amidst teh fighting (m... view book

I wrote 766 days ago

Many thanks, Ellen. Will be going over it and 'plumping' it up where needed, and will take care of the 'he' issue. It's finished now; you might find the last chapter confusing, but push thru it and you won't be dissatisfied, I hope. view book

I wrote 776 days ago

Thanks, Cait, as well for the alpha read. I hadn't gone over everything to clean it up. I do overuse 'begin', and mostly to give a sense of urgency, or more likely, action. But it got out of hand. I cleaned it up and used it now for actions that are truly 'beginning'. I got so caught up in the ... view book

I wrote 779 days ago

Thanks much, zenup. I've been told my writing style is a little old-fashioned, and maybe that might be a problem in the future. I try to write succinctly and precise when it's another race of people trying to get a handle on English; computer language that is supposed to be exact and other specifi... view book

I wrote 786 days ago

Thanks! From your bio, it looks as if you would like it! Check back occasionally, I'm still working on it! view book

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