Is saying that on the basis of the first chapter I went away to see if it was available for kindle, and promptly downloaded it, comment enough? Some fabulous descriptive writing, my sort of humour, and what looks like fairly light-hearted fantasy, great! view book

I have only read the first chapter so far but it really made an impact. I have massive respect for you for sharing your story so openly. I think it's well written and I will be back when I have more time to keep reading. There was one sentence that stuck out for me though, maybe I'm just being d... view book

I've only managed to find enough time to get to Chapter 8, and although I don't normally read Christian fiction I really liked the pitch and the idea behind it. The first chapter really drew me in and I will definitely come back and finish reading when I get time. I love your descriptive prose, very... view book

I read chapters 1-5 and while there were some aspects of the first chapter I wasn't keen on, like the brand name dropping (you've set up their background well enough that I think it goes without saying) and the use of "raven-haired beauty" there was enough tension and plenty of questions it brought ... view book

I have read Chapters 1-4 and will try and read some more soon. I really feel for poor Joey, he hasn't had an easy time of it but there's something very likeable about him. There are some interesting themes developing but there is a lot of information, and some of it is delivered too matter of fact-... view book