First of all thanks for backing my book and for the useful comments, I'll keep in mind and try to improve, and second thanks for introducing a good book. I like your intro, the story it's interesting written based on reality, making it very catchy. Captivating reading, hope to see it published. Goo... view book

Nice intro and very interesting pitch. But the news that the war is over was a little out of the blue, like the book just started and it ended, like the intro is one style, lingering and this one is sharp. But i'm waiting to see what's next, as i said, the pitch is very very good. Good luck! Ra... view book

i like the sound of your writing...it has a certain melody in it that is hard to find, no staccato...just flowing, playing with the words. Great one, backed with pleasure. Good luck. Ramoon view book

riddle me this..., riddle me that..., which is the link between the stories? i dare you to find it if you are interested to read it all :) view book

good written, but you already know that :) view book