Chapter one is so very sad! When her father was dying, Maeve hurt her shin. You wrote that she was diappointed when the bruise disappeared. The bruise must had been a longing for her father, a memeory and hope of his existance. If she had never pumped her shin on the chest, she may have thought that... view book

WOW!!! Your story caught my attention the moment I read the first few words. It is AMAZING! I've only read the first chapter, and I already love it. No one would have known the thing that the main character was following was an elk unless they read the description of the story. Those who didn't r... view book

I love your interesting vocabulary (jerkey-jerkey and hidey-hidey, just to name a few) and your style of writing. It reminds me of county movies. I am concerned about one thing, you used s**t in the first two paragraphs A LOT. Not a big fan of bad words. Although I like your use of unusual words, I'... view book

Richard, I took a look at the first chapter. Tam is a very funny character, I couldn't help laughing. I noticed that you classified your book as universal, but I think it should be classified as moderate. Tam'shgoughts about Sarah are not suitable for children... his thoughts are also what I lost i... view book

Rachel, I am in love with your book. It caught my attention from the moment I began reading the first chapter. This story is full of emotions and mystery, which, in my opinion, is one of the best combinations in writing a wonderful story. I love Bea... she is such a realistic character, and ... view book