This is a very ambitious project you have going here. And two more books to follow? Wow. Fantasy is perhaps the most difficult genre (aside from sci-fi) but it seems as though you have a fairly firm grasp of what you want to do. Did you plan out the book before you began writing it? Just wondering. ... view book

Very professionally done. Polished as well as anything on this site. I've read Annabella so far (it reminded me of Hemingway's early shorts) and plan to read more. I love short stories because the reader doesn't have to sit through hours and hours of reading in order to get to the end. In this day o... view book

This takes us right into the heart of the action and shows us what it's like to be there. Well, nothing is like being there, of course, but you do a fine job of painting a picture for us. Intriguing and exciting, filled with description. Some of your sentences are too long and should be split up int... view book

I'm sure you already figured this out but you're going to have to reformat your text and update your book. Nonetheless, I read it and liked what I saw so far. Very interesting, keeping the character in one location and having her observe the events as time passes over her. World Wars, epidemics, the... view book

What a wonderfully original idea! This is something new for the fantasy genre and it's about time! Are you sure there are no elves in this book? What about ogres? Anyway, joking aside, this is well written and deserves some attention. We get to do some traveling to Japan, too, which is something dif... view book