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The Eagle's Gift is my first book and I'm glad it's available for others to read. Thanks to everyone who has contributed to making the book better than it ever was. In particular, major thanks to Phil P. who was my right hand and the best writing buddy I could have asked for.

Chapters of my second book, The Purple Morrow, have been uploaded to the site. As it's brand new, I would really appreciate getting thoughtful and constructive reviews/comments in order to improve the story. :)

I owe a huge thanks to my husband who made both of my AWESOME book covers. :)

My backing policy is simple: I back books I like, and I refresh my shelf at least once a month. I enjoy reviewing, but please note I am HONEST and try to provide concrete examples and suggestions since I feel that kind of feedback is the most helpful.

Agents and publishers interested in discussing the book or any of my other work (see web address below), can contact me at:
dyegirl_00@hotmail.com

Thank you in advance to anyone who chooses to back either of my books.

At the bottom, there is a link to my online portfolio, which includes some of my short stories.



favourite books

Atwood: The Blind Assassin, Surfacing, The Edible Woman and others
Tolkien: The Lord of the Rings, The Silmarilion
Herbert: Dune series
Lewis: The Space Trilogy, Chronicles of Narnia
Card: Ender's Game
Bradbury: The Illustrated Man
Many, many others

my websites

http://Writing.Com/authors/dyegirl    

HarperCollins is not responsible for the content of external internet sites.

Self-publish with CreateSpace

my books

The Purple Morrow-Book 1

Dyane Forde

Jeru's quest for redemption leads him to seek the Purple Morrow. What he actually discovers will change more than just his life, forever.



Ten years have passed since the Rover army moved into the Southernlands, nearly decimating the peaceful people who live there. That day, Jeru was saved from certain death but his life would be changed. Unable to forgive himself for past mistakes, he decides to seek the Purple Morrow, a rare butterfly rumoured to have the power to change a man's life.

Kelen, a Rover Commander, is on a quest of his own. Tasked with the duty of conquering the Southernlands, as well as a secondary mission from his father, he enters the South. But the foreign land is having a strange effect him, drudging up old memories and making him question his duty. The only thing guiding him along the dark road to truth, is the secret object he carries with him.

It is up to Jeru to save the Southernlands from the Rovers, but Kelen, his mortal enemy, stands in his way. As the tangled webs of their lives draw them together, Jeru's connection to the Purple Morrow is revealed, unlocking his true destiny at last.

 

The Eagle's Gift

Dyane Forde

Darkness is growing, slowly consuming the land of Nardin. It will take two very special people and their equally special love to defeat it.


The once beautiful land of Nardin is falling apart. Evil has found its way into the realm and is slowly eroding it through sickness, drought, and the threat of revolt.

For years, Princess Charlotte has witnessed the wrecking of her homeland, and she is on the verge of giving up hope that anything will ever change. However, one day, she is offered the chance to do the one thing she desires more than anything--save Nardin. Assisted by an unusual companion, she sets out to accomplish the task, braving danger, self doubt, and the threat of falling in love while unearthing a marvelous mystery along the way.

 

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earthlover wrote 1 hour ago

Hey Charlotte. I will take another look sometime in the near future.....

Kate LaRue wrote 11 hours ago

Thanks for letting me know. I'll take a look soon. Kate

Dr. J wrote 19 hours ago

I understand about the site "taking over" one's life!!!! and glad to ....

Dr. J wrote 1 day ago

Dear Dyane: Your books look like very interesting reads! Welcome to ....

Narcissus wrote 1 day ago

What's new with me? Well.....working hard...long hours...little time....

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I wrote 4 days ago

Hi there, The story is developing nicely. You have included nice elements of mystery, and the story flows well. The dialogue is realistic. I also find that the writing is age-appropriate for the target audience. I wish I had something more to add, by way of suggestions, but so far, it's very good. ... view book

I wrote 11 days ago

Hi, I just had time to read the first chapter today, but my first impression is that is it very good. It is not easy to write a good first person story, but so far, this one works. The inner dialogue is smooth and relevant to the story. The MC is well defined, and more importantly, believable. The ... view book

I wrote 42 days ago

Hi, I liked the first chapter very much. The writing is very smooth and it invokes compassion and empathy for the MC and her child right off, while also raising important questions about why she's there. The ending is also very strong. Will highly star and back when I have the chance. Best, Dya... view book

I wrote 50 days ago

Hi there, I like the prologue a lot. The writing is clean and very well done. The action sequences flow well and clearly show what is happening in the story. Below are a few things I thought I would mention. These are only suggestions for you to think about so feel free to ignore anything you don... view book

I wrote 51 days ago

Hi there, I decided to read the story, The Couple's Cigarettes. I noted some thoughts on the story, below. Feel free to take or ignore anything I have suggested. :) One thing I would suggest is to stick to one person's POV. The story begins in Laura's, but soon afterwards, the reader is given ba... view book

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