Well I wouldn't dream of backing you! This is too good a draft to be bothered with a shelf. Great read - intriguing that I've been fussing with my chapters so long and you crank this onto the site. I wasn't gone that long was I? Regardless - I shall remove you from my shelf. Let me know whe... view book

Agree with the previous comment. The humor is refreshing but typically I would recommend writing out numbers. You keep a swift wit with your humor. Shelved. view book

Great premise... I was hooked off and on with the story and there were a few instances through the first few chapters where I felt like I was bored - but you would hook me again. This I found refreshingly frustrating - however I will have to read further before I drop it on my shelf. ... view book

Interesting. Outstanding premise - great idea, and wonderfully refreshing. Horribly truthful though. Love it - shelved. view book

Well done! Caught me off guard actually - was not what I expected at all. Great prologue - but I got concerned quickly - for some reason (not sure why) chapter 3 really wore on me. However you did bring the "fight" back into the book. Great job. On my WL. view book