I am very taken with this story - I can imagine buying it in printed form, and if I had time I would read all the chapters that are uploaded here. There were few wrong notes, and I particularly like the way you don't spell everything out but leave the reader to fill in some gaps. I am happy to back... view book

Hi, KZ, I am backing this novel - I haven't a clue what it all means after a couple of chapters, but I like the writing style and the fact that you seem to be grappling with enormous concepts which may or may not be explained as it goes on. Hope you get a good deal for the film rights! best wishes,... view book

Hi Barry, I've just backed this because I think it's likely to do well as an interesting piece of writing which seems to shed a lot of light on a culture that is very different from anything I know. Personally I can't read very much of this as I find the style so irritating, although at the same ti... view book

Hello Pia, What a lovely picture you paint in the first chapter - will read more later but my eyes are tired at the moment. I found it very intriguing. Like someone else who commented, I didn't expect to like this when I read the pitch - maybe that needs a little bit more work or a different angle... view book

I've enjoyed what I've read of this very much indeed - never mind the target audience, I feel your writing could draw people of all ages into the story. The only thing that puzzles me slightly (and I am clutching at straws here!) is that Gareth seems very much younger in the first chapter than in t... view book