This is a really nice font, first of all. Anyways, the premise/pitch was quite intriguing, since medicine-related books are rather rare, with the exception of memoirs like Gawande's Complications. That said, I was completely hooked after the first chapter. While Dana's instinctive medical inspectio... view book

Wow. This is pretty amazing. From the first sentence you have me hooked. It's poetic, reminiscent of Roy's God of Small Things. I agree with the person before me, your story is the best I've read on the site. Definitely deserves a place on the ED. There's just one sentence that jumps out at me; it... view book

Wow. This is pretty amazing. From the first sentence you have me hooked. It's poetic, reminiscent of Roy's God of Small Things. I agree with the person before me, your story is the best I've read on the site. Definitely deserves a place on the ED. There's just one sentence that jumps out at me; it... view book

Hi, I'm heading off to another class but I wish I had time to finish reading the whole way through! Once I got to the end of the first chapter I was pretty much hooked. Your characters are clearly alive to you, and thus they come alive for readers, too. I like how you mention an event earlier and t... view book

Hi, Here to return the read- and subsequently got hooked, reading all your chapters straight through! The cliffhanger of the first chapter is particularly compelling. As a whole, the work is definitely polished and cohesive; seems like you have a really strong idea of the world you are creating. Al... view book