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about me

I've become disillusioned with this website.

I'm a writer.
I guess that is obvious.

I've uploaded the first eight chapters of my YA fantasy novel. You might like it.

It has demon kings, unicorns and talking teddy bears.

Just saying.

"Reading is a trip!" - Captain O.G. Readmore

My personal email is jimfreedan@technocomics.com

Jim Freedan is a pen name.

I get a lot of comments on my book's title. It (and the cover) was created years before a certain vampire story was published. DAWN is followed by two more books; EVE and NIGHT. I'm going to change the title to 'Pandemonia Chronicles' once I have new cover art drawn to replace the original one.

favourite books

The Hobbit by J.R.R. Tolkien
Chronicles of Narnia by C.S. Lewis
Slayers series by Hajime Kanzaka
Indian in the Cupboard by Lynne Reid Banks
Redwall by Brian Jacques
Dealing with Dragons by Patricia Wrede
The Princess Bride by William Goldman
ToraDora! by Yuyuko Takemiya
The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya by Nagaru Tanigawa

my websites

http://cmartell.blogspot.com/     http://inkpop.com/projects/4362/twilight-chronicle

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Self-publish with CreateSpace

my books

Pandemonia Chronicles: DAWN

Carey Martell (pen name Jim Fr....

Possessed by a Demon King who wants to destroy the world, a teenage boy becomes the enemy of a Goddess and her Paladin knights.


An encounter with a strange medallion leaves sixteen year old Gestalt possessed by an ancient Demon King, making him a key player in a war between the Demon King and the Goddess of Life. Unfortunately, the Demon King wants to destroy the world and the Goddess wants to enslave everyone in it!

With the aid of a talking teddy bear, a grumpy demon dog and a unicorn princess who wants to marry him, Gestalt embarks on a journey to stop the Goddess’ sinister plot and find a way to get rid of the Demon King—yet, he must rely on the power of the Demon King in order to stand a chance against the minions of the Goddess.

Can Gestalt resist against the corrupting temptations of the Demon King and save the world, rather than destroy it? Is it even possible for a mere human to resist the power of a Demon King?

This novel has a total of 15 Chapters and is complete at 76,127 words.
Chapters 1-9 have been uploaded.

 

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A G Chaudhuri wrote 3 days ago

Dear Carey, Words can’t express my gratitude. Because of your unwav....

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I would like to personally invite you to come read my creation. If yo....

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my name is Benedicta,i saw your profile today and i became interested....

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I would be very grateful if you could find the time to check my book ....

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I wrote 772 days ago

This isn't the usual genre I read, but I thought it was well written. Backed. view book

I wrote 776 days ago

I like Greek mythology, so I found this story entertaining and funny. I agree with other commentators that it needs a little editing though, but nothing that isn't easily fixed. Backed. view book

I wrote 792 days ago

I believe your writing accurately describes the setting and creates believable characters. I will say that your pitch does introduce the characters, but it is vague on what the central plot of the book is about. You may want to consider tightening the pitch, as a good pitch can be used to build your... view book

I wrote 792 days ago

Wow, you've had a pretty fascinating life! I'm unsure how wide the market is for a memoir like this or how to even critique it, but I found it interesting, so I'm backing it. view book

I wrote 792 days ago

As a fan of surreal story-telling, I greatly enjoyed this. I loved the pop culture references, and I think you start it out quite strongly with a reference to Paris Hilton. Backed. view book

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