Hi Kim. I’m enjoying *Invisible Justice*. Nice job of conveying the hypersensitized Sam in Chapter One—a good mix of the ordinary and the utterly extraordinary, establishing a clear sense of place at the same time you’re displacing the hero. (Or something like that; end of a hard day, here in Ban... view book

Hi Sarah-Jayne. I've revisited, as promised. I don't have anything to add to my earlier remarks, however. I think your story is shaping up nicely. I haven't explored much fantasy, but I find this very readable. I'm putting it on my shelf. Cheers, Collin (*MOM*) view book

Hi Alice. I like the gentle pace of your story, which nicely reflects its setting. The two sisters come across as real people and, despite the gentle pace, you suggest real problems between them from the outset, both those Ariel and Mara express, in one way or another, and other, more implicit ones... view book

Hi Peter. I like the way you so economically and readably establish a cosy sense of place and of warm relationships from the outset. (Shortly thereafter, you introduce Didier’s portraits of the alienated, an effective contrast.) Your characters quickly and effortlessly come alive for me. (And the ... view book

Hi again. Forgot to say: I'm backing *Tnúth*. Cheers, Collin (*MOM*) view book