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about me

I'm 30, based in West London, I write screenplays that fall under comedy dramas based on the British Asian and gay culture. I do delve into to different genres as and when inspired to do so.
My writing style is simplistic but entertaining. I'm looking to get this novel published and would really appreciate feedback/comments if possible.

I will try to read as many books as I can on this site- I must warn you- I find it difficult to get into books (as you can see from my favourite books, I've only truely enjoyed one- I know it's odd)

favourite books

'Life isn't all Ha Ha Hee Hee' by Meera Syal
Shakespeare's 'A Midsummer's night dream'- Ok I know its a play but it was still a great read for me

my websites

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my books

No Worries Have A Curry

Jyoti Thanjal

An action/black comedy set in India 1998, five young women escape from the first female prison in Punjab and are chased throughout India...


After 9 months of incarceration, Baksho, Preeti, Bilo, Jags and Gulab find a way to break out from the cage, society clipped their wings, so they decided to run. Whilst ducking and diving from the clutches of the Police, the girls turn into bandits/con-artists who rob from the rich and give to the poor, sometimes.

Following chapters are available on request, the edited version will be available on Amazon Kindle very soon.

In the meantime, please feel free to comment, good or bad, all will be taken on board. A big thank you to all those who have taken time to read and commented on this so far.

 

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The Knowledge wrote 5 days ago

Hi jotters, My book is simply called ‘Madeline’ (Link below) She ha....

Andrew Hughes wrote 7 days ago

Hi Jyoti, Thanks so much for your long-term support of The Morning D....

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Hi Jyoti Given what's on your shelf - I thought my book might fit yo....

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Hi, have look at ache in my heart, thanks, read,comment and back it p....

iandsmith wrote 23 days ago

Dear Jo, An excerpt of my novel (you know which one) is going to be ....

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I wrote 66 days ago

A funny and engaging read, well structured, narrative flows at a good pace, characters are excellent, you've done a great job! Best of luck Jo view book

I wrote 66 days ago

Great piece of work, well developed, fascinating characters and bags full of originality. Good job! Looking forward to seeing this published. Keep up the good work. Best of luck Jo view book

I wrote 81 days ago

This is the best 'chicklit' I have read so far, I enjoyed the quirkiness of it. Liked the humour and most of all, 'Holly's' character, I warmed up to her from the start. We all know someone like her... well I do anyway. An entertaining story that grips you from start to finish. Main plot develops sm... view book

I wrote 101 days ago

3 Chapters in, you have realistic and likeable lead characters and each of their stories, so far are gripping. I liked the way you've introduced Ness's background via her 'diary' thought that was nicely done. The pace is great, keen to read more, which is a good sign. Giving this 6 stars! And backe... view book

I wrote 103 days ago

I was gripped from chapter 2, love the premise and the likable characters who are funny in the right places, I am officially hooked... only reached chapt 6, I'm really enjoying the Jules and crews journey so far. This is a 6 star rating. Keen to finish this story to give a much detailed comment. ... view book

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