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David Southam

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I'm a 25-year-old psychology graduate and Benefits Officer from the north east of England. I've been writing fantasy, science fiction and horror since I can remember, but I've never determined to write a full novel, until now.

Please give the first few chapters of my fantasy epic, The Keeper of the Sightless Eye, a read. Any feedback would be appreciated. In return, I'll endeavour to read your own submission as soon as I can!

I have a habit of picking apart other people's grammar and punctuation. Most people seem to find this helpful, but I fear that others may find it condescending. If you ask me to read your book or agree to a swap, and wish for me not to proofread your work and comment only on the content, then please let me know.

My email address is davidsoutham@hotmail.co.uk, should anyone wish to contact me privately.

favourite books

John Connelly - The Book of Lost Things
Dean Koontz - Odd Thomas
Stephen King - The Stand
H. P. Lovecraft - Tales of the Cthulu Mythos
Tolkien - The Hobbit, and The Lord of The Rings
Guy Gavriel Kay - The Fionavar Tapestry
David Eddings - The Belgariad
Oliver Johnson - The Lightbringer Trilogy
Stan Nicholls - Orcs: First Blood
Hugh Cook - The Wizards and the Warriors
H. G. Wells - The War of The Worlds
Neal Asher - The Line of Polity
Robert R. McCammon - Stinger

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The Keeper of the Sightless Ey....

David Southam

A witch, a monk and a renegade band of warriors must unite to stop the long-hidden magi from subjugating the kingdom. Prepare yourself for war.


'Galmer saw the creature bound into the woods behind the mule, screeching as it went, and soon he could hear Bessy screaming in the dark. Never before had he heard an animal scream like that. The cries of terror and agony ended quickly, to be replaced by a wet and brutal sound; the hunter was feeding.'

A witch, a monk and a band of renegade warriors called the Iron Wolves seek to overthrow their false queen. Queen Winspear is a witch and leader of the magi, a long-hidden order of malign magicians plotting to subjugate the kingdom, with the help of monstrous demons from the twisted realm of Vorridion.

The outlawed protagonists are thrust into a war, in which the only way to clear their names and avoid execution is to unveil the true nature of their queen. All the while, the heroes must struggle to survive in a wild and dangerous world that seems dead set against them.

The novel is the first in a trilogy, set in a world inspired by the history, folklore and culture of Medieval Europe.

Brace yourself for horror. Prepare yourself for war.

 

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I wrote 56 days ago

I'd like to offer some suggestions for your pitch. I hope that's okay. I aim to be helpful rather than critical, and you may, of course, disagree with my opinion! Pitch: “Threads of fate connect those who are destined to meet, regardless of time, place, or circumstances” No comma is required ... view book

I wrote 58 days ago

I read your first three chapters, and I have to say that this is pure class. It's one of the most enjoyable reads I've encountered on Authonomy so far. You're building up a lot of suspense, nothing is overwritten or redundant, and your writing style is extremely effective. I'd just like to off... view book

I wrote 61 days ago

This is a great story, brilliantly written. I’ve read quite a few stories on this site dealing with the subject of abuse. Most have a tendency for deep, drawn-out description of the way the victim feels. If the description of the abuse and the victim’s reactions to it is dealt with well enough, n... view book

I wrote 61 days ago

Sorry it took me so long to look at your work! I really enjoyed your story. It is well-written with good characterisation. Your descriptive writing is particularly good, as evidenced in the fall of the bell. I’d like to offer a few pointers. Take them or leave them. Pitch: “She's lost he... view book

I wrote 66 days ago

This is a very enjoyable read, with good dialogue. I like your premise, splicing modern young fantasy with old British romance. I'd like to offer some suggestions for your first chapter. Take them or leave them!: “I wanted more to my life, but was convinced that I wasn’t like all the other ... view book

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