Well, put me in the choir. I've read through Chapter 4. I put it on my bookshelf. Finish it. view book

Hello, Hey, Tim Parallax, this is Scott Parallax :). Thanks for taking so much time for me about the pitch. I appreciate it. My excerpt pitch is a try to intrigue, without going the moive-trailer route. I do believe that movie teasers are an art form of making something bad seem good. There are less... view book

Being a journalistic type, I do tend to chop away. At first I was thinking too much description, but later on, I liked it better. From the beginning, I would say this isn't my type of book. It might be a bit too gushy, but I am intrigued, despite my brutishness, because you have a lyrical voice. view book