Diana, I've just read the first three chapters and I'm gripped by the story. You write wonderfully, you're charactrisations and relationships are perfectly portrayed with your narrative and dialogue. When you switch back to 1937 it is clear that I am reading about a another time. I will certainly re... view book

Yannis, I'm not normally a reader of fantasy but was captured by your story telling. You have a strong narrative voice and I think you description of the scene/situation is well written, as are character descriptions - I really liked the way you described Igor's physical appearance. Your combinatio... view book

Bill, I have very much enjoyed what I have read so far. You have started the story off well with the action of the train crash gripping the reader. I also think you have used short sentences to good effect. Your prose brings the story and characters to life. I think you have been able to set the fou... view book

Shalini, you're an engrossing story teller. You have bought the characters to life with your writing and you narrative and dialogue suit the two time periods you are writing about, demonstrating to the reader the difference in attitudes and vocabulary between 1940 and 2011. This is a great premise w... view book

Neville, really liked your prose and interaction between the characters. Esmeralda's mythcial presence really adds depth to the story and Tommy's transformation and pact to tell no one but his gran intrigues the reader. Gladly backed. Shuhin - Lost Reunions. view book