A beautifully crafted, elegant story. It almost has a poetic feel to it, not only through your writing but also through the subject matter. I liked it immensely, and think it's appeal would be even greater to a slightly younger audience. view book

This is a well-written, fast paced story - there's a good mixture of longer and shorter sentences and everything is tight. It has an exotic quality to it - a feeling of the unknown that just adds to the tension. And the names aren't too outlandish to be unpronouncable! view book

This was like reading a dream - that's the best way I think I can describe it. Beautifully poetic and refreshing - oxymorons such as "his voice soft and fierce" shouldn't work in prose but here they do. Faith and the human spirit seem to play a large part in this story, as it does in mine. Serene... view book

This is extremely well written - usually I have things to comment on that I think could be improved, but not here. Your description is creative and illustrative without being purple and adorned with too many adverbs etc. Your writing is tight, your dialogue well structured and above all it is funn... view book

Rocky, you sure no how to tug at the heart strings! Some really nice writing in there pal; emotionally high charged and gripping. You even managed to keep the potentially cheesy ghost scene tight and touching. Love it. view book