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Many, many thanks to all those who supported Museum of Old Beliefs.

The picture is my son and the old dog (sadly no longer with us, the dog that is). After the first time, not for all the Chum in China could I get him to clean the other end. And the vomit, you couldn't believe the....


I've now finished the first draft of a children's book First Fracture (75k words, should edit down to around 50K) and this is the start of the first re-write. I'll be interested in seeing how it is accepted.

If anyone knows how to check a grammar and spell check program, can you let me know (smiles)


- HOWEVER, YOU WANT ME TO READ, YOU LEAD -

Ps - If you are going to invite me to be a friend, please don’t be upset if I don’t reply. The request will probably be lost in the news feed somewhere ;-}



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Ian
Ian.lavan@sky.com

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First Fracture
I. Peter Lavan
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First Fracture

I. Peter Lavan

There’re things in this world to fear - don’t let yourself be one of them.


You should know when a day starts as bad as this, something different is going to happen – But then again, different and meeting up with something that feeds off human fear, that's more then different... Isn’t that so, Chay?...Chay....CHAY!

Slightly dark children's book, penned with a touch of fun... (Well, according to my world!)

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maretha wrote 2 days ago

Thank you so much for returning my message. I am watchlisting your b....

Little Black Book wrote 2 days ago

Hi Peter, I really enjoyed reading FIRST FRACTURE! What a refreshi....

maretha wrote 2 days ago

Dear Peter I would like to know if you would be interested in a swap....

upforgrabs wrote 4 days ago

Hello, I've just started a thread to raise support for Cara Gold's 'A....

Brian G Chambers wrote 6 days ago

CHIRG Hi Ian sorry I can't leave you a report on the comments page ....

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I wrote 3 days ago

(Smiles) If the plot is about the missing Dad, mmm, what's the bit in the prologue. Could it be a bit of a bogus lead? Hi Peter, I chuckled my though a couple chapters of your book that is packed with fast-paced action, vivid imagery, and unique and sometimes wacky characters. You have a wo... view book

I wrote 6 days ago

Chirg crit These are great stories, Brainy Brian could easily be a small stand alone series. There was only one little part the jolted my reading and that was the mention of stress in the first story. I would question whether stress is something a young child would relate too. I think the style... view book

I wrote 10 days ago

I've only got to the last line of chapter 2 and I know this is good. Have rated it V. high and will give a full review shortly - Ian view book

I wrote 10 days ago

Hey Tim, thanks for this (I think). Seriously many thanks - Ian view book

I wrote 10 days ago

A CHRIG? review. Your characterisation is brilliant! You develop your characters in a way that the reader easily interact with them. Also the way you do not go into detail about the MC, it allows the reader to become/engage the MC as the story develops. In my experience that is very important - ... view book

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