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***Am after input / readings on The Spirit Of Nagasaki***

I am the co-creator and contributing editor of satirical 'paranoia & lifestyle' webzine Home Defence and have been writing novels for a decade. I've written eight novels in all, most fairly literary but across many genres (although I'd be reluctant to show the first three attempts to anyone).

If you comment I will watchlist you and comment back when I can. Send me an email if I seem like I've forgotten or need a nudge. Sometimes reading fiction on a screen can feel a bit against nature – like watching event movies on a mobile, but I'm keen to be constructive rather than withering and I’m not going to nit-pick at the level of the sentence or point out grammatical errors unless they impact on my enjoyment of the story.

Also I don’t like to give plot advice after only having read a portion of a book, preferring to trust in an author that they have an eye on the bigger picture and it'ill all come together eventually (I just haven’t got to that part yet).

S.O.N. is complete at 98,000 words and the first fifth is up here. The epigraph for this book hasn't been included but it's from 'Timequake' by Kurt Vonnegut and goes like this:

"I had to add, though, that I knew a single word that proved our democratic government was capable of committing obscene, gleefully rabid and racist, yahooistic murders of unarmed men, women and children, murders wholly devoid of military common sense. I said the word, it was a foreign word, that word was Nagasaki."

favourite books

A Confederacy of Dunces - John Kennedy Toole
Infinite Jest / Oblivion - David Foster Wallace
Anything by Don Delillo
Vineland - Thomas Pynchon
Survivor / Choke - Chuck Palahniuk
Absurdistan - Gary Shtengyart
Revolutionary Road - Richard Yates
Infinite Jest - David Foster Wallace
Wonder Boys - Michael Chabon
Watchmen / From Hell - Alan Moore
Other authors: Jonathon Franzen, George Pelecanos, Michel Houellebecq, Denis Johnson, Kazuo Ishiguro, Sherman Alexie, Jim Thompson, Douglas Coupland, Hubert Selby Jr, Garth Ennis (Preacher), Raymond Chandler, Haruki Murakami, Sam Lipsyte, Jonathon Lethem, John Wagner, DBC Pierre, Charles Bukowski, F. Scott Fitzgerald, Richard Yates, P J O'Rourke, Salman Rushdie, Richard Powers, John Fante & Stephen Sherrill.

my websites

http://www.homedefenceuk.com/     http://www.myspace.com/alandevey

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The Spirit of Nagasaki

Alan Devey

The tale of the rise and fall of a religious cult.


In the early part of the 21st century a new religion begins to recruit followers, men and women left cold by modern society who flock to The Spirit of Nagasaki. This movement provides them with support and a God-given meaning to their days, but behind the welcoming embrace a trio of cult leaders have their own ideas, about exploiting lost souls and realising their ambitions, causing death and havoc when everything they have built comes crashing down. Equal parts drama, mystery and thriller, the story of the rise and fall of a religious cult is told in flashback through the major players as events degenerate towards murderous destruction. Meanwhile Special Investigator Joe Sweeney attempts to pick up the pieces, pulling together evidence and tracking down suspects through the aftermath of the crimes. A compelling and timely study of evil’s slow progress, The Spirit Of Nagasaki touches on the darkest of our collective fears on its way to a truly devastating climax.

 

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I wrote 905 days ago

Hi CP, This is hugely accomplished with prose that's crafted to perfection and thoroughly believable characters (didn't even notice the predictability of calling an Irishman Paddy!). I love the way you write from within the Irish vernacular and never put a word wrong (or waste a syllable). It'... view book

I wrote 905 days ago

Hi Mikey, It's very easy to get swept along in the energy of this work and the voices of your characters are utterly convincing. I read Chapters 1 & 9 and definitely enjoyed them enough to shelve the thing. In terms of the big picture, 150,000 words or so is quite a lot (450 - 500 pages at a g... view book

I wrote 906 days ago

Beautifully stylish, this is a poetic rendering of a coastal community and a thoroughly convincing depiction of that combination of confusion, angst and exhiliration that overtakes someone upon leaving the world they know best for the great unknown. Refreshingly uncluttered prose (with the occasiona... view book

I wrote 916 days ago

Hey Cara, Your poetic sensibility shines through and you're clearly a very gifted writer (a prodigy no less!). Fantasy romance really isn't my genre but I know good writing when I see it - backed. Al The Spirit of Nagasaki P.S. If you'd like my opinion on any specific sections you only ha... view book

I wrote 916 days ago

Hi Amanda, Superbly written, you never put a foot wrong, and totally convincing in the evocation of a post-collapse America, the fight for survival it engenders in a nation of formerly rapacious consumers. In the current circumstances, and following Cormac McCarthy's Pulitzer-winning 'The Road... view book

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