You are a talented writer there is no doubt of that. The plot is intriguing and incredibly interesting. The only thing I think you need to work on is the descriptions. Yes there are times in which they work very well but beware not to be over-descriptive. It sort of slows the reader down and takes a... view book

I like the concept of the story. You present it in a very intriguing manner. I was pleasantly surprise by the way you introduce your characters with the puppet thing. I found it to be very creative and appealing. The prologue sort of reminded me of Matrix with the "You have no idea what the realit... view book

WOW! What an entertaining, biting and witty read! I took a break from studying for my finals resolved on reading one or two chapters and then I found myself in the tenth chapter. Time just flew by as I wanted to read more and more. The concept of the book is quite original. The way you portray hel... view book

I've just finished reading the first two chapters of your book. I'm eager to read more but unfortunately it is all I have time for today. So I'll tell you what I think so far. Firstly I loved the first chapter. Not only did I think you succeeded very well at capturing the ambiance of the scene but I... view book

Very good plot; it makes for avery interesting read. I agree with chvolkoff who says this book introduces great philosophical questions to young adults. I like the way you introduce the characters and the plot. But (and I say this hoping you won't take it the wrong way because if I say it it is be... view book