BH review. There’s no better puzzle in crime than who was Jack the Ripper. Made me want to open this and learn more about him. I read the first chapter. PLOT. If there’s a problem with this (for me), it’s that there’s a lot of repetition. First, there’s the description of what happens to John, then... view book

FORFEIT BHCrit. I read the first chapter of this. It was a fun read. Plot – A lot of stories begin with a person waking up in a strange bed so at first I wasn’t impressed. In the usual story, however, the gal discovers she’s gone to bed with a horrible person so discovering that Xander was a nice... view book

BULB BH REVIEW I read the first two chapters of this. I liked the whole future atmosphere except I was surprised people still read books. I thought in the future they’d all be referred to as Kindles. PLOT & PACING. A problem with a story set into the future is that you have to describe many new th... view book

WALK TO PARADISE GARDEN I was instantly impressed with the amount of research that must have gone into writing this story; the small details included are awesome. Besides that, you have a very readable writing style. It’s easy for a reader to believe he’s really inside your characters. CHARACTER... view book

CIRCADA Bh review I read the first two chapters of this. It’s an interesting look at the old south. PLOT & PACING. Chapter One begins with a real “hook”: a man about to kill himself. And I realize, because it’s the title, the Circadas need to be described at some point, but I wonder if that needs... view book