Hi Sue, I read the 4th chapter coz that's the one that really stood out to me - you said experimental and I read because I'm so over conservative, traditional books and ideas. It's short fiction of course, but it's damn freaking nice. Work with this a bit more and stick it in your portfolio. I... view book

Really tight writing. Just two small pieces of advice: lose the exclamation marks in the first few paragraphs - you don't need them and they look silly. And later you talk about relating something to your 'boyfriend at the time.' Make that 'boyfriend of the time.' Just tiny things, but overall a... view book

This is a weird book, but that's why I love it so much. Would I buy it in the bookshop? Yes, of course I would. I hope others discover this book coz it is a true diamond in the rough. My fav book on this site to date! view book

i find it hard to believe that this book has not already been published. if i had a publishing house, i'd already have bought it. great. view book

Hi Jim, I have not read everything that I may have, because I have read enough to have made a solid judgement on the work (which is what most agents will do anyway). Concisely, it is a big work with all the requisite imagery for a fantasy title. Someone else complained a touch about 'rosy prose... view book