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Hi,I'm an Aussie and used to be a Physicist and an Information Scientist. I am now trying to become a Writer and Editor in the speculative fiction genre and am consequently very excited about the concepts behind this website.My main work in progress is a 3,4 maybe 5 part fantasy scifi cross genre series involving alternate worlds and time travel. A sample of 'Engelian Adventures: Transgressions' is available here and is being serialised on my personal web site at www.phillberrie.com.au/FictionI did have another novella published here, 'The Changeling Detective', but I have removed it as I found that the two books were diluting my ratings. The story in its entirety is also available at www.phillberrie.com.au/FictionI also write non-fiction and as of 2008 I began writing a regular column called ‘Reality Bit(e)s' on the 'A Writer Goes On A Journey' website, an Australian Speculative Fiction Writing Community. These articles are about things I think speculative fiction writers should know about. Google this if you are interested, but I also mirror these articles on my own web site.Oh, and I also edit and critique. Though I'm a newbie here I'm a veteran on the Online Writers Workshop, moderate a Yahoo critiquing group and am the resident editor on the 'A Writer Goes On A Journey' web site mentioned above. I also do it professionally as a 'continuity editor', but I don't think I'm supposed to talk about that here.NOTE: FROM NOW ON I PLAN TO CONCENTRATE ON CRITIQUING THE SPECULATIVE FICTION GENRE (I.E. FANTASY AND SCIENCE FICTION). IF YOUR STORY ISN'T SPECULATIVE IN SOME WAY THEN I'M NOT INTERESTED, SO PLEASE DON'T ASK, OTHERWISE GO FOR IT.
"Dracula" by Bram Stoker"Creatures of Light and Darkness" by Roger Zelazny"The Left Hand of Darkness" by Ursula Le Guin
http://www.phillberrie.com.au/
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Hi, Me again. Just finished chapter nine and I sad that it's over. I'm sure you'll do well and am glad that I've shelved you. More comments, edits and suggestions below. Hope they're useful. Phillberrie (Engelian Adventures: Transgressions) --- Edits, comments and suggestions Chapt... view book
Hi, Me again with more comments, edits and suggestions. I can see why Askidad recommended your story. Just finished chapter 6 and will now shelve your book. Have to come back later though to finish it off as I have other stuff I should be doing. Keep writing. Phillberrie (Engelian Adven... view book
Hi, Just finished chapter four and will watch list you and come back later. Here are a few edits you might like to look into Phillberrie. --- Hi, Askidad recommended I read your story. Edits, comments and suggestions Chapter 1 "quicker than a Greek poet after and epic bat... view book
Hi, Just finished chapter five. Will shelve the book on the strength of what I've read so far. Some edits for you: Edits, comments and suggestions Chapter 4 "Judd let out a brief whined" should be "... brief whine". "ushering the whole flock out of harms way" should be "... harm's ... view book