Good read, this. It was the whole idea which attracted me, neat that you make the gods react to a thesis opinion, even better that you have the academics piffle around jealously and unethically. Good to be true to life! I liked the scenes at the language school, also convincing. A crit - I think... view book

I think that Chaps 2-4 open well, each one different. Perhaps 4 the most arresting. I only wonder if the reader can hold each character and his environ clearly until he appears again for we've had to switch focus three times. The Prologue starts off tersely and efficiently establishing this a... view book

I have enjoyed reading this. The idea of opening upon the approach of the dreaded ships was good. I liked the device of telling the story from the sister's point of view and this is maintained. I did think that athough your readers will have seen in the pitch who is the MC, we did need an idea of... view book

Neat. I'd put the target group a bit younger. 8-12. Depends what you do with the end. Bcked. Rick Some Time Before the Massacre view book

My sort of book. will recommend to others Rick Some Time Before theMassacre view book