I backed both of these a while ago, but I just want to say, they are both extremely powerful stories and it's obvious that, despite everything, Christ is working through you. I sincerely hope you find a publisher; it's well-deserved. view book

Without shoving anything down our throats, you manage to give positively fantastic characterization, a great setting, lots of information so we're not confused without bogging down the narrative in the slightest. The prologue was just as good as the rest of the book--which, by the way, is amazing. I... view book

I really like this book, first of all. It has more impact because (judging from the content, as well as a few of the comments you've posted) you're educated, you've done your research, and you hold your beliefs for excellent reasons that you can easily defend (there is a lack of this in Christian li... view book

Okay, first of all--I think this is excellent. The description is great (I'm a total sucker for description, especially in fantasy), and there's something almost poetic about the opening. It reads with the ease that comes with rhyme (to me, anyway) even though it doesn't rhyme. The only suggestion... view book

This is excellent. So often books featuring child molestation--even if they mean well--miss the mark. Not only have you hit the mark, first in the character of Jeshua, and then by demonizing the father without reserve (all the signs and behaviors of an offender are present in Jack, by the way, all t... view book