The first chapter is good to hook the attention of the read. it flows very well. as you probably noticed English is not my mother tongue so I don't like to critic too much on sentence but in the chapter 5 there was something I found weird (but then it might me me) after she creeps downstair and hea... view book

I pick up this book for the comedy tag, wasn;t sure what to expect it is also classified in the crime section. however you pitch was good enough to make me read more. from the first sentence you caught my attention and you kept me going. Ok there's a concentration of swearing but then it fits with t... view book

Indeed I did read this before. I just could not remember but if the title changed that's the reason. Good luck view book

Hi I just had a quick read of your book (chapter 1 only). You have a nice voice and a pretty fast pace.I like the idea of your story, however I had a bit of trouble reading it as you introduced so many characters that I was a bit lost. Also when natalie wakes up it seems to me as she has too en... view book

Why is it in Spanish? well I assume it is. I had fun trying to understand the first few lines view book