IT's certainly an interesting storyline. However, I feel a bit confused with all the different aspects of the story. Especially with all the different characters and their separate associations with the main character. It may jusr be me, but I found it a difficult read. Rebecca An Impossible pai... view book

Wow! Interesting story! And quite Biblical, too. Rebecca An Impossibe Pair view book

Ben, I have to admit, I found your story a bit hard to read and understand. Maybe it's just me. But other than that you have good sentence and paragraph structure and a good use of adjectives and verbs. Good job! Rebecca An Impossible Pair view book

Wow! Good story! I love it! Rebecca An Impossible Pair view book

Good work! An interesting concept, too. I love history myself, so I could easily see myself in your novel. Rebecca view book