Here's another RCG review, with apologies for taking so long. Sue - short pitch could be snappier! long pitch, the two sisters don't seem connected - we need a bridge that links their two stories. I like the opening para - Jess struggling with the front door key - not your usual romantic heroine... view book

Toby - this is the kind of book that gets under your skin and into your dreams. Kafka comes to my mind - the sense of an Intelligence at work whose ways we do not understand is delightfully suggested. The title is wonderfully ambiguous. Development of story and character is hard to comment on as the... view book

Melissa - this is rather strong meat for me and the subject matter is a long way out of my realm of knowledge. Vampires behaved differently in Mr. Stoker's day! I have read two chapters, and find your story intriguing and the characters streetwise and youthful. Your pitches exactly fit the tone of t... view book

Marcie, with many apologies for the weeks it has taken to do this - finally, my RCG review. Overall, you have a great central idea - a naive woman struggling to understand the crazy events around her and sort out her feelings of love and trust for August. Some of it works well, but as it goes on, m... view book

How well I remember those times. You write with confidence and wit - though Sarah is not going to have an easy time, her story already has my full attention. Highly starred, and a place on my shelf - yours, Pan view book