Your varying points of view are haunting, fluid, and captivating. I found myself drawn in to the action quickly. Backed with pleasure. JLux Finding Letta view book

Some powerfully scary memories are shared here. My only critique is that you don't need to put words into all caps. If you need to emphasize a word, I would put it in italics, instead. A little less like shouting at your reader. I did keep going up to the genre to remind myself this was non-... view book

This is one of those books that definitely begs to be read in print on paper bound together. Some days I wish I also taught students younger than 9th grade because then I could incorporate books like this into the classroom. Very well-written. Pleased to back. Oh, and please don't change the tit... view book

Please bear with me through this review. I really like the premise of your book and believe it will succeed in the YA world, but I believe it needs a little work. These are just suggestions and can be taken or tossed. This is one of those books I don't want the prologue. May just be me, though... view book

Such a cute twist on an eerie concept. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters of what you have posted here. I believe your intended audience will enjoy the humor and (mis)adventures of Alice, Luke, and their classmates. You do need to make a few proofreading corrections, but I'm sure you will g... view book