Well, you make me laugh! Your writing is so full of personality and really easy to read. Really hope something comes of this. Keep going and keep sending it off to agents. xx view book

This is a really thoughtfully and intelligently told story. As a reader and mother, I appreciated the honesty but also thought you managed to take a step back with your narrative which must be hard to do. You do not gush, but take your time and carefully set out your story and reasoning. Backed with... view book

Strong concept and narrative make for a very engaging read here. The dialogue too feels very authentic. Nicely done. Backed with best wishes. Clare (Second Lives) view book

This is a strong and pacy thriller with what promises to be a gripping plot. The writing is confident and the dialogue convincing. Backed with best wishes. Clare (Second Lives) view book

Jason, you've managed to produce a piece of work that is both highly original and extremely funny. Backed with best wishes, Clare (Second Lives) view book