I'm not a fan of fantasy, but I'll give my 2 cents anyway. I like that this was done in first person and you allowed us to get into your protag's head, however there were times when this read more like 3rd person. If you want to write the first person, the big advantage is letting us get a closer l... view book

Not my type of read, though it does have the makings for an interesting detective/crime story. When I read the long pitch, I was disappointed that it sounds so much like the plot of so many other serial killer stories I've seen-- a sadistic killer stalks beautiful women, the detective on the case ha... view book

I'm probably not the best person to comment on this because I'm not into Physics or plots that require high tech equipment, or etc. That said, I'm backing this because I think it's ambitious, and if you can pull it off, people may buy it. With a story like this, there's a lot of fact-checking to be ... view book

I was hesitant to pick this up because I don't like that it's from a horse's point of view. I'm not an animal lover, but I can tell that you are, and it is evident in your writing. Although I've only read chapter one, I'm not sure this story begins in the right place. I'd like to see more action i... view book

I'm not a fan of this genre, but you get my backing simply for holding my attention enough through the first chapter. You aroused my curiosity, and that made me want to read more. I don't know if it was just me, but at the beginning of the first chapter, I was unsure what was going on, and unsure w... view book