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Jambi

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I'm from the mountain/desert state of New Mexico in the U.S.

Writing is my main hobby, and I hope to attract a traditional publisher or agent at some point. "Fringe" has been overhauled and rewritten twice. It's not really the same book as the one that I downloaded in '09. Please enjoy the newest version of “Fringe of Darkness.”

I’m happy to exchange reads and backings, and I especially enjoy and rely on your useful and valuable comments. Thank you in advance!

Thanks to all who have backed Fringe to date.

I invite you to check out my Web site:

Traveling at the Speed of God - my first non-fiction book, self-published in 2008. (Written under the psuedonym of Jann Hart.) TSG is available through Barnes & Noble and Amazon.

Warmest regards,
Jan



favourite books

Tao Te Ching
Hobbit & Lord of the Rings
Catcher in the Rye
13th Warrior
The Poet
Dead Zone
The Green Mile
Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy
Harry Potter series
Bridge to Terabithia
Holes
The House of Scorpion
Freak the Mighty
On My Honor
Tuck Everlasting

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http://www.lofhealing.com    

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Fringe of Darkness

Jan Schroeder

Zane is hit by lightning, but he's not dead--he's not even burned. But there's a live current inside that's raging to get out.


After Zane’s encounter with the lightning, he is both terrified and fascinated by the prickling electricity that zooms out of his hands. At first, he doesn’t connect it with his father’s incident years before and his dad’s resulting incarceration for murder. During a spontaneous out of body, when Zane’s dad, Rick, reveals that the lightning caused the murder, Zane divulges that the lightning is now inside him as well. Alarmed, Rick warns his “live wire” son to keep the lightning in at all costs.

Zane refuses the warning because he is suspicious that the lightning can also heal. His awkward attempt to experiment on the mysterious Raine Forrest, who inadvertently absorbs the despair of others, fails miserably, and she rebuffs his intrusion into her private world of pain.

Although Zane has had some success taming the electricity, he realizes that this is a force beyond his control, especially when he finds out that the lightning will absolutely kill him if he doesn’t use it. Still harboring feelings of hate for his father, Zane is duty-bound to keep his dad alive—and to keep himself from getting dead in the process.

 

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I've Got Claws wrote 3 days ago

let me know if you come back and I'll back your book again.

TheImpeccableEditor wrote 17 days ago

Many thanks for your continued support in these final days of the mo....

bene20 wrote 19 days ago

my name is Benedicta,i saw your profile today and i became interested....

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I wrote 40 days ago

PASCUAL'S BIRTHDAY Hi Diana, What a treat to read such a wonderful story. You write with a compassionate and gentle flow that comforts the reader as we read; that is an unusual gift. I searched for things to nitpik and found very few. 1. Chapter 2: "I know he secretes some of the vegetable... view book

I wrote 48 days ago

MDWS77 Your story has great promise. When you use a word, such as daydream or forms of it, do not repeat it. Maybe try: broke her reverie, the images in her brain dissolved, etc. Also, be very careful about Point of View "head hopping." You begin with Yu-na, and to the reader, she is the main POV... view book

I wrote 48 days ago

Hi Danielle, I read an earlier draft and this one is much improved! Good writing takes time and a willingness to learn and grow with the process. Good for you! On my shelf. Jan Fringe of Darkness view book

I wrote 58 days ago

THE IMPECCABLE EDITOR Hi I.E., Bravo for the depth and devotion to this book. Lots of practical advice--a necessity in this field! I really enjoyed your examples on how to build better word usage to create a bolder picture. I can tell that you put your heart and soul into this ms. Good luck and ... view book

I wrote 59 days ago

HAKTAW HEART Hi Bill, Your pitch drew me in, and you delivered! There's a good reason why your book is number one: Fabulous use of descriptive language, twists and turns, and surprises around every corner. So much fun to read. I finished all seventeen chapters and hope that you'll post more! ... view book

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