Ok - I have read until chapter 4 and I am going to carry on with this. Your writing is captivating, you paint a picture with your descriptions and accurate dialect. I really understand the poverty and how she feels as "the little black girl". I love your short paragraphs, I love your art of storytel... view book

Bojan Chapter One and I am hooked. Backed on C1......reading more A breif negative - I find screen reading really hard on my eyes, and especially yours - could you make the font size a little larger? However - I like the way the thoughts are in italic and I like the good desciptions of the ... view book

I was intrigued by the title and the cover, but your pitch lost me a little. You are packing lots into the first chapter, you are asking the reader to visulize new planets, new creatures, but I am not entering the space because it moves spaces, for me, too quickly and I am just getting used to the c... view book

I read non stop until the end of chapter 6, and this is easy to read, compelling and so true to real life. There is a lot packed in this, I want to know more about Jacks relationship with his father, I want to know now that he has taken the brave and honest move to tell his freind he is being screwe... view book

This has got pace, its edgy, different, new and I sped through 2 chapters loving your writing style and your characterization. Oustanding. I will read more......love Sarah view book