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You could check out my website (see link below.) While here, I hope you enjoy a gripping adventure that can be read on many levels.

Authonomy is a treasure trove. A generous place too, with some very unique people who give genuine feedback, mostly :) I'm a better writer for it.

Only half of my novel is on line, and the chapters do not reflect changes I made, like moving the beginning (prologue) to another place. The story is however complete at nearly 120 000 words. I'm forever editing and have not sent out queries. I can be contacted at: ashenv@aol.com

The pitch here was recently changed, and I am hungry for feedback.

CoM made the E-Desk in February 2011 and since then I received a Harper Collins review on 10 000 words with helpful advice. The sequel in progress loops into the future - both a Science of the Heart and a Science Fiction.

Here an interview that appeared on the authonomy blog:
http://blog.authonomy.com/2011/01/authonomy-showcase-ashen-venema.html

The books I like here would make a long list, so I mention only one - on my bookshelf on and off - deeply touching and original ... 'Last Days of the Transitional Objects Institute' by Andrea Levine.


Many thanks to Bradley Wind, for transforming my Atlantic image into mystery :)

favourite books

Authors ...

1001 Nights - 1001 Nights - 1001 Nights - 1001 Nights

Grimm Brother's, Alice, Huckleberry, Jack Vance, 2 Banks, J.L. Borges, I. Allende, Garcia Marquez, D. Lessing, Ian Mc Ewan, Murakami, S.Faulks, R.Eco, Anthony Stevens, Seamus Heaney, E. Dickinson, C.G. Jung, T.S. Eliot, Ibn Arabi, Rumi ....
Start again - Joseph Campbell, F. Herbert, Harper Lee, C. Ruiz Zafon, BB, The Little Green Men go down the Stream, Ramsay Wood - Kalila and Dimna, Selected Fables of Bidpai, Muriel Spark, R. Chandler, Fowles, Italio Calvino, J. L. Borges, Bruce Chatwin, Sebald, Markus Zusak, Idries Shah, Tahir Shah .... Course of Mirrors ...

my websites

http://www.courseofmirrors.wordpress.com    

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my books

Course of Mirrors

Ashen Venema

Gran gazed right through me with a solemn air. ‘We must never give up our search for The Real,’ she said.


Isolated for years as the result of a pandemic and confounded by the bitter rift between her parents, 19-year-old Ana has a numinous experience.

… Everything around me shimmers from within itself. I am bridge, river, riverbed and water falling from the cliff, the aria of water. I am air, breeze and water dust rising. I am mirror to mirrors - looking from beyond mirrors ...

Empowered; Ana travels along the River Gazal to find Cara, her soul-sister from a parallel future, who predicted their lives would conjoin in the West. Her quest is burdened with the secrecy of a confidential letter entrusted to her by Gran for the King of Itaka. Disguising her identity she crosses dangerous bridges between her parents' contrasting realms, battles outer and inner enemies and discovers her gift. She meets Luke, an artisan and twin to a maverick preacher, neither of whom is aware of the other’s existence or their true parentage. As the brothers fight over her, and family betrayals unravel in Itaka, Ana’s deeper quest begins.

This is the mystical journey of a woman who realises the creative power of what is reflected in the heart.

 

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Davidmauriceware wrote 1 day ago

I would like to personally invite you to come read my Book. Many have....

TheImpeccableEditor wrote 2 days ago

ha ha, relax, yes. . . except for all the 'other' work I have to get ....

Winterflood wrote 2 days ago

Thank you

Bill Carrigan wrote 2 days ago

Ashen, you are so sweet! Here's "The Doctor of Summitville" again on ....

AndrewStevens wrote 2 days ago

Thanks, Ashen!!

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I wrote 12 days ago

Entwined ... by Rodney Jonez ... A very satisfying read, with a whiff of metaphysics. Evelyn's voice is fresh and likeable. The food-terms made me smile ... hamberry bagel, deep fried breaded choke hearts ... and the Zin thing ... and, having read in your previous works, the link to The other Mr. ... view book

I wrote 65 days ago

Rene - my time is limited at the moment and I am a slow reader, so apologies for the sparse feedback. LF40 Review - Master of Miracles ... Science tends to shy away from exploring what we intuitively know. Which makes this a significant book. You do visions well. They are difficult to do well. I... view book

I wrote 75 days ago

Sarah - Of Nature and Man - Thanks for bringing your poems to my attention. I read half-way, addicted :) It's not often that I find poetry I like here. Some great lines, and much passion. Will come back for more. Pia view book

I wrote 87 days ago

LF 40 Review GE Fordson - Nothing You Can Do The story provides moving observations of complex relationships, especially between Sam and his father. This is less a review and more of a patchy, personal response. I've some niggles re: the beginning of the story. Any psychotherapist worth the... view book

I wrote 110 days ago

H. M. Goodchild - After the Ruin - reading four chapters I was mesmerised throughout. Whole paragraphs reverberate, I read quite a few aloud. The theme of loss feeds a longing that informs the future. Strong images too ... he sat surrounded by a little space of silence that no one could cross ...... view book

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