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Hello! For regular readers of my page (you know who you are) you will notice I have a new "about me" - exciting.

A Reason to Stay is now published. Thank you to everyone who offered me constructive criticism and helpful feedback. It was very much appreciated. I will continue to lurk and upload my next novel: "The Book of Abisan" when I have enough words to make it visible.

I always return reads and try to be constructive and helpful with my comments. I am not interested in swapping backings as I am here for feedback, not to race to the desk. I feel that sweating is unattractive and no-one wants to see that thank you.

I am also a badger, but that's another story.

favourite books

That's impossible to list, but I'll hit you with a few. I love fantasy if it's well written, and as such "The Lord of the Rings" and "His Dark Materials" trilogies are high up on my list. I love Virginia Woolf's subtle humour and "Between the Acts" is another favourite of mine. I also love classic children's books. I think perhaps that children's authors have the freedom to explore more diverse themes and give more scope for the imagination, although this is not always true. I'm sure this will be regularly updated the more I read anyway.

my websites

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my books

The Book of Abisan

Claire Evans

Do you believe in destiny? When two worlds collide a new hope is born.


Yfrey is lost, alone in a world where her kind is persecuted. She has one hope, to find The Chosen One and help them save her world from destruction by a tyrannical ruler.

My rather impressive cover is care of Spudgun - http://www.authonomy.com/writing-community/profile/52c9cacd-c446-4b76-8d80-0aeb4d7452bb/spudgun/

 

A Reason to Stay

Claire Evans

Who would have thought that being knocked out by a plus size mannequin would lead to a complete life change?


Stephen is stuck in a rut: dead-end job, no romantic prospects, no hope. A series of bizarre accidents look set to change his path forever.

Having been given a year off work, Stephen decides to undertake a journey across country, aboard a less than manly, nonetheless affordable, mode of transportation. A near miss with a miniature poodle leaves Stephen in a cast, his moped wrecked and his journey postponed; he is forced to spend 6 weeks in a village.

His physical journey at a standstill, trapped amongst a quirky cast of characters, Stephen finds himself on a different kind of journey, that of self discovery. Learning more about these people makes him discover new things about himself, and gradually his angry, sarcastic world view dissipates. Life in the village seems perfect, but surely this idyllic existence can’t last, especially for someone as hopelessly accident prone as Stephen?

A Reason to Stay playfully satirises society. Follow Stephen’s adventures whilst he conquers his fear of shopping, teenagers and lascivious older women, in a humorous yet strangely real tale of the effect one person can have on those around them without even realising.

 

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khaula mazhar wrote 12 days ago

I am asking all my friends to take a look at the new book I have uplo....

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I write with greetings and invitation to read a chapter or more of my....

ClaireLyman wrote 52 days ago

Hi Claire I wanted to say thank you! At some point in the last year ....

iandsmith wrote 59 days ago

Claire, My first ever commentor. I'm telling everybody. Since Septemb....

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Will you fight for CUPID (god of sexual love) leading men or for LIBE....

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I wrote 219 days ago

OK: Chapter Two: "Pick Frankie up FROM nursery" at is used in conversation, but is not actually grammatically correct. You have "too" twice in one sentence. Maybe swap one for "as well" so your read flows better. "Suddenly a bit alone" reads awkwardly to me, I would lose the "a bit" I'd... view book

I wrote 226 days ago

Hello! Sorry it took me so long. I've been stuck in formatting hell, but I'm here now, so Hurrah! I shall start at the beginning and work through. My comments tend to be a tad disjointed so I hope it makes sense. Excellent so far. Very well edited. I think Pino Grigio should be capitalised as... view book

I wrote 237 days ago

Sorry it's taken me so long to get to you. I've been crazy busy. Now I'm supposed to be relaxing, so here comes your crit! It will be a bit disjointed, so hope it makes sense. Is jarring the correct word in this context? Aw, I feel like a broken record sometimes! Never start a sentence with an... view book

I wrote 248 days ago

Sounds good from the pitch. Brace yourself, here comes my comment! All good so far. I'm on paragraph 13, you've got sill, where you mean still. Need to add a few commas to the head's speech unless he doesn't breathe when talking. Well I'm done with the first chapter and that's it for corr... view book

I wrote 251 days ago

OK, you kinda asked for this by posting a forum thread, so here we are: Personally I'm vegetarian, so can't comment here. I have no technical suggestions so far. Presumably you are aware of your technical excellence. I am hoping that the liver is human though, otherwise this is looking a lot... view book

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