Normally, I find that the crime/thriller genre is a bit hit and miss. I can't count the amount of times I've looked at a crime book, and been really taken by the pitch - only to find that the book doesn't live up to my expectations. That definitely wasn't the case with this book. I really did enjoy ... view book

The flow of this book is smooth and easy to read. The actions of the characters make sense in later chapters - though I do think that the things with Olwud and his father could have been handled better. People cope with grief in different ways, it's true, but I find it difficult to believe that Olwu... view book

I’ve only read up to chapter nine at the moment... but I think that this is a really good book, and I will definitely be back to read more soon. I’ve noticed a few errors here and there; it might be worth getting another person to read through and see what you’ve missed. It also seems that certain t... view book

A very thrilling read with interesting characters. A lot of work has clearly gone into this book, and I think it definitely deserves its high position. All in all, a very enjoyable read; I didn't see anything that needed to be changed view book

This is a really good idea, with very interesting characters. I’ve noticed a few mistakes – such as full stops in the place of commas – and the wrong usage of word spellings (bare instead of bear, for instance). I did really enjoy this, and I hope you consider putting more chapters up. view book