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40 year old father of four. Native of north west England - The Wirral - with Irish background.
Now living and working in Sweden with an understanding wife who lets me scribble in the quiet moments.

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Dropping Babies is complete at 80,000. About half of it is uploaded.

Private contact - jpodonnell1407AThotmail.com

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DROPPING BABIES

John O'Donnell

An adultress is thrown in a hole. But Mavis Clark won't stay buried.


In a wood adjoining 'The Hundred', an exclusive gated-community on the Wirral Peninsula, Mavis Clark is thrown in a hole. What appears to be a domestic crime has murderous consequences for her neighbours-death is coming to Stellan Johansson's family-as well as the corrupt Merseyside Detective-Gabriel Joyce.
Watching from the woods a child murderess is preparing to strike. And a pitiless drug-lord is scheming to keep the status quo.
Taking place over 5 days, this noir-style tale pierces the social strata of modern day Britain with a fast-paced, uncompromising narrative.

 

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Colin Neville wrote 4 days ago

Hi John Thanks very much for taking the time and trouble to read t....

jlbwye wrote 8 days ago

Hello again John, Here’s some more stars for a book I’ve enjoyed i....

iandsmith wrote 10 days ago

Okay, cheers. Here goes. Good luck with the edit - Ian

iandsmith wrote 12 days ago

John, What can I say? I was on the road and I decided not to listen. ....

Colin Neville wrote 12 days ago

Thanks John. Look forward to your comments in due course. Colin

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I wrote 4 days ago

Hi Colin, 2, 5 and 7-randomly chosen. I enjoyed them all, best for me was no.7. The power was in the carefully crafted first thirds before the dramatic denouement in the last third. Piercing stuff and oh so very familiar-the social constraints and hypocrisy of that environment are recreated very w... view book

I wrote 31 days ago

My impressions David, for what they are worth. This is 'haute cuisine' writing that stimulates the reader in many ways, satisfying on an intellectual, emotional and sensual level. The problem with reading straight from the screen is the nakedness of the narrative; with a book in your hand, an illus... view book

I wrote 32 days ago

Very enjoyable read Benedict. It's seamless prose, well-polished presentation and above all else some very engaging, fresh characters. That's all about reading as a writer but I was swiftly enjoying this as a reader; the humour and immediacy of the MC drew me in and kept me engaged. No mistakes spo... view book

I wrote 33 days ago

How's the form Joseph. Glad i found this-via Chris Carr's shelf. Scanning the comments this is dividing people into the 'loved it' or 'left cold' groups. I'm more in the former as the subject matter is fascinating and the psychological depth of the narrative satisfies my interest. The writing is tig... view book

I wrote 33 days ago

One word and that is-Sweeping. This has a majestic feel to it, completely assured voice, and statesman-like authority. Clearly impeccably researched and pitched as authentically as it could be whilst underlaced with narrative charm, tension and oh-my romance. And all starting on St Patrick's Day! B... view book

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