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I read too much.

Blood Sisters is the first book I have finished. I recognise that I have an awful lot to learn*. Any constructive (or just any) criticism is more than welcome. Thank you.

*I'm sure if I knew just how much I'd just roll up in a ball.

If you read or write Fantasy, make your way over to the Alliance of Worldbuilders, a thread for Fantasy Authors. Mutual support, criticism and cake* can be found here:

http://www.authonomy.com/forums/threads/61851/the-alliance-of-worldbuilders/


I like a lot of the books here, it would be invidious
to make a selection, so that's just what I'm
going to do (in no particular order):

The Devouring Mother,
The Loneliness of the Blue-Eyed Assassin,
Wolf and the Riddle,
Electrify Me,
The Shadow Fairies,
Death and the City,
Good Neighbour,
Samael,
Pearl Edda,
Fame and Infamy,
The Girl from Ithaca,
Shadows in the Dusk,
Forgotten Gods,
Zamorna,
Ashes by Now,
Fingerprints,
Children of the Lost Moon,
The Ratter's Tale,
Finders Keepers,
Daimon,
Bad Bishop
Relic...
Oh dear, a couple I have forgotten the names of; I'll have to try and remember (that'll be your book then, no doubt).

I'll back books I like. It might take me a while to find them, there are quite a few out there.

Please feel free to back my book if you think it's good enough.

Agents who may wish to represent me can contact me by email: k1ddgarrett at yahoodotcodotuk

Books on which I have finished inflicting my critical peccadilloes or proofreader's eye include:

Viene La Tormenta by Scott Thompson
Zamorna, by Tina Rath
Witch Princess, by Mandy Springer.
He-Dog and Balless by Keith C. Blackmore
Death And The City by Lisa Scullard
Guardian by L H Leece
Wolf and the Riddle by Kasie Stadig
Magic's Guardian by Kasie Stadig
Finders Keepers by Annalisa Gulbrandsen

It takes a while to read a whole book. I like these, they were worth the time.

* I lied about the cake, sorry.

favourite books

Noggin the Nog - Oliver Postgate & Peter Firmin, The Histories - Herodotus, The Hobbit - JRR Tolkein, Ulysses - James Joyce, A Pogo Sunday Brunch - Walt Kelly, A Wizard of Earthsea - Ursula K Le Guin, War and Peace - Leo Tolstoy, Hobberdy Dick - K M Briggs, An Elephant for Aristotle - L Sprague de Camp, The Secret of the Unicorn - Herge, Medea - Euripides, Borrobil - William Croft Dickinson, Gravity's Rainbow - Thomas Pynchon, The Whispering Mountain - Joan Aiken, The Man who Japed - P K Dick, The Midnight Folk - John Masefield, Wuthering Heights - Emily Bronte, Wicked Lovely - Melissa Marr, The Brothers Lionheart - Astrid Lindgren, Foucault's Pendulum - Umberto Eco, Jonathan Strange and Mr Norrell - Susanna Clarke, Puck of Pook's Hill - Rudyard Kipling, Asterix in Spain - Goscinny and Uderzo, Catch 22 - Joseph Heller, Emil and the Three Twins - Erich Kastner, Cat's Eye - Margaret Atwood, The Code of the Woosters - P G Wodehouse, Dead Souls - Nikolai Gogol, The Pirates in the Deep Green Sea - Eric Linklater, Under Western Eyes - Joseph Conrad, The Story of the Amulet - Edith Nesbit, The Confessions of Felix Krull - Thomas Mann, Candide - Voltaire, Treasure Island - R L Stevenson, Dog Days - Gunter Grass, The Good Soldier Svejk - Jaroslav Hasek, Monday Begins on Saturday - Boris and Arkady Strugatsky, Monkey - Wu Cheng En, The Praise Singer - Mary Renault, The Eagle of the Ninth - Rosemary Sutcliff, Moominland Midwinter - Tove Jansson, Dr Mirabilis - James Blish, Adventures of Huckleberry Finn - Mark Twain, Lord of Light - Roger Zelazny, American Gods - Neil Gaiman, The Planet Buyer - Cordwainer Smith, The Boy in Red - Violet Needham, Latro in the Mist - Gene Wolfe, Night Watch - Terry Pratchett, The Drawing of the Dark - Tim Powers, The Adventures of a Simpleton - von Grimmelshausen, To Say Nothing of the Dog - Connie Willis, The Baroque Cycle - Neal Stephenson, The Magic Toyshop - Angela Carter, The Blue Flower - Penelope FitzGerald, Flashman at the Charge - George MacDonald Fraser, "Rommel?" "Gunner Who?" - Spike Mlligan, Black God's Shadow - C L Moore, Darker Than You Think - Jack WIlliamson, Figures of Earth - James Branch Cabell, The Master and Margarita - Mikhail Bulgakov, The Moon of Gomrath - Alan Garner, Commentarii de Bello Gallico - Julius Caesar, English Passengers - Matthew Kneale, Black Orchids - Rex Stout, Diary of a Nobody - George and Weedon Grossmith, We Didn't Mean to Go to Sea - Arthur Ransome, The Once and Future King - T H White, Gil Blas - Lesage... I may have missed a few. Oh yeah, anything by Aristophanes...

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A Looking Glass, Darkly

K A Smith

A nanowrimo work in progress


Shucks, I don't know yet, but let me know if you think I should throw the towel in. Or throw myself in.

 

Changeling

K A Smith

Jenny’s new neighbours aren’t human, her new friend is a witch, and her little brother is just not himself. Half-term is going to be different.


Strange things have been happening since Jenny and her family moved to the countryside. To think that she was worried about being bored. Not any more.

The worst of it is her little brother. Jake hasn’t pulled Jenny’s hair or glued her slippers to the floor for over a week now. Jenny thinks the fairies might have taken him and left something nice in his place. She thinks it might be her fault, and she wants him back before her mum notices. So, what to do?

Simple, crash Fairyland, find brother, return. How difficult can it be?


This is (almost totally) unedited first draft material, so there will be many errors of punctuation, because punctuation is not something I do naturally. I am more interested in what you think of the 'feel' of the tale and what doesn't work for you than I am in the vagaries of my apostrophes, but if the punctuation kippers it for you, I guess I need to be told that, as well.

 

Blood Sisters.

K A Smith

Mehret wants to be left alone, but it's tough at school if you've never been before. It's even tougher when you accidentally jinx your classmates.


Mehret knew there would be dangers in the city; she just didn't expect to be one of them. She appears to have jinxed a classmate and caused a power outage using powers she can hardly believe she posesses. Frightened and confused by these events, she determines to learn to control her gift, with the help of Dr Ambrose. He is trying to teach Mehret the Art before she does any real harm, but Mehret finds it difficult, even without the distractions that life keeps throwing in her path.

If Mehret hadn't just become friends with Sylene then getting suspended from school wouldn't have been so bad. She hopes to have more time with her father, but when he isn't working he is spending his time with a woman that Mehret finds it hard to like. Beset with troubles, she can't even take refuge in her dreams any more. Two girls are visiting her as she sleeps, calling her sister and trying to lure her into their world.

Then Sylene goes missing from Mehret's doorstep. Mehret goes in search of her, to find that family and friendship are not quite what she thought.

 

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So relieved and glad you're feeling better KA! Look forward to ha....

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I wrote 70 days ago

A fascinating piece of worldbuilding in the old tradition, with a clear goal, distinct possibilities for good and evil, clearly drawn positions for the bad guys and a distressingly large conundrum (The Golden Flux - Peace or War, Good or Evil--all that) for the protagonist. A milieu is evoked viv... view book

I wrote 109 days ago

Another corker, where's the rest of it? view book

I wrote 248 days ago

Yep. It all works and it resolves well. Nuff said. A few more notes, if you want me to do the rest of it I can come back once I've looked at a few other books. Chapter 10 . . . particularly intangible (intransigent?) hair . . . And argh is usually spelt with an 'h'. I sat dawn (down)... view book

I wrote 251 days ago

Chasing Azrael crit: http://www.authonomy.com/books/33681/chasing-azrael/read-book/#chapter This is a well-crafted and entertaining piece of work: hats off (I had to find my hat and put it on for that, as I'm typing this indoors). The thread of humour running throughout leavens a dark theme ... view book

I wrote 252 days ago

Alliance of Worldbuilders critique Nr. HA-4473-XXRZ The usual terms apply: please use Dr Manciple's unvanishing elixir to view the small print. To Slay a Dragon crit: http://www.authonomy.com/books/33874/to-slay-a-dragon/read-book/#chapter The characterisation is light, but effective, ... view book

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