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Elisa Gianoncelli

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I am pleased to announce that I have re-written and edited the first six chapters of my novel 'The Thirteenth Child'. Please have a read and leave me some feedback I really appreciate all the comments I get, as some criticism has been very helpful. Hope you like it, the children I teach absolutely adore it. If any of you have written children's books and want my pupils to read them, please let me know.

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The Thirteenth Child

Elisa Gianoncelli

A book aimed at 10 year olds through to middle teens. It is a fantasy adventure book about a special child called Tredicino


The story opens in East London around the middle of the last century. A male child is born to a couple of woeful entertainers. On the other side of europe his grandmother who has been specially chosen by the alpine fairies part of the ancient group called the 13th society, to be his grandmother and protector. As Tredicino grows up, he and his brothers are slowly exposed to more and more fantastical elements, including leprechauns and unicorns, but this is only the beginning. As the story progresses, they encounter creatures beyond their imagination as they travel to their family's ancestral village in Italy after the strange death of their grandfather. As Tredicino finally reaches 13 years of age, his powers come into full force and takes over his destiny as protector of his people, battling with werewolves, demons, and other evil spirits.

 

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I wrote 230 days ago

i love this book and have used it as my companion whilst re-editing and revising my book the thirteenth child -it has made me think and i almost feel the writer has become my friend mainly due to the writing style which is chatty but firm and reassuring all at the same time -well done and thank yo... view book

I wrote 231 days ago

ValentineBaby brought this book to my attention and i am so glad she did -really enjoying it -really, really useful and a book i would recommend -elisa gianoncelli -the thirteenth child. view book

I wrote 252 days ago

Hi Noelle,have nearly finished my editing -as i said that was my first draft - the new version will be on here soon and i will look forward to seeing what you think -thanks for commenting- Elisa view book

I wrote 372 days ago

i have read a lot of the books on this site to the children i teach and did so with this one -but it did not hold their interest i think it is because the DRAGON idea has been done so many times before -i actually liked it and particularly the idea of the rainbows disappearing but found there was ... view book

I wrote 379 days ago

i read this book to some of my pupils and they really liked it-what i noticed was no fidgeting they just listened ,quite entranced and then said they could not wait to have more read to them next time -Dean was a hit thats for sure -elisa gianoncelli -the thirteenth child . view book

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