A very different read for me, but I found the story captivating and well paced. I read more than I'd intended, and enjoyed it. A few minor typos etc, but we all have those, nothing that can't be easily fixed. Well done. Backed last week, and given a high rating now Michael Croucher (Bravo's Veil) view book

You paint powerful images with your words and they make for an engaging and satisfying read. You do tell your story well, but I think it will be even more compelling if you trim your prose just a bit. I really enjoyed what I read of this, and I'm sure it will do well on Authonomy and elsewhere. I... view book

I liked this from the start; a very intimate and compelling story that is well written and completely authentic. Your writing style and skill as a storyteller move it along nicely. Your heart is very much in the story and it shows, well done. Backed and highly rated. Michael Croucher (Bravo's Vei... view book

Although I tend to favour books with a bit more pace, I found myself enjoying the writing style and the vivid images that your writing conveyed. As a matter of fact, it' s the kind of story I've occasionally enjoyed in the garden chair on a Saturday afternoon with my favourite beveridge; not every r... view book

A good early building of tension and an intriguing premise to the story. It's a slightly different genre for me, but I enjoyed the change and I found it well written and compelling. I think the story would be even more powerful with a slight trimming of words, but that's my take only, others may not... view book