Just pointing out a couple of things (like the premise and enjoyed the writing) 'It[']s fucked' - you had something belonging to fucked instead of it is fucked - chapter 2 I was told that you shouldn't use () in fiction - but the Book Thief has them. Not asking for a comment back or a bookshe... view book

I like th concept of this. It is a good example of present tense writing, which some just can't pull off. Just one thing technically. I was told in fiction to avoid using () and you have them a fair bit. Maybe emdashes instead? view book

Stories like this are sooo 'in' with Australians at the moment. Well written - Backed. view book

This was a breath of fresh air for me. I mainly go on Inkpop (teen version of this site) as my main book I want to promote is a YA. On there the teens make the same mistakes over and over. None of that here. I loved the reference to the kitten. I also like how it is a fantasy that is using plai... view book