Very well done. The journey is the story within the story within a story. Magic and action. Great read. view book

Chapter 3 did not come up for me. The business applications are clear. After 6 chapters, I, as a Manager can see were I need to go spend some time. So I think you should publish this work and let me buy a copy. Lots of value in the Business section. view book

I enjoy how early on the characters don't have much of an accent in their voice. But later, the voice comes from the hills and small towns. Very good setting for a murder. This would make a good TV show. Thank you for sharing. view book

Love the core message. Doing a little can mean a lot. As for the writing itself. Each paragraph should have a single thought or focus. Some of yours are more than a page long, and have several perspectives and messages. Sometimes less is more. view book

I'm old enough to understand how to laugh at myself. Your way of doing the twisted thinking cha-cha is great. Love the chapters you have put up here. Thanks for sharing. view book