I've read three chapters. Though this is not my thing, I think I would read this if I was in that age group - Early teens fiction. This is not an easy age group to please, but I reckon you'll probably have more young female readers than male readers. So the first victim was a good choice I think. Wh... view book

So my red hair belongs in the history of a secret society, huh? Well I never. Okay, you like to take the long winded route and explain every thought during the conversation. This can be useful if the book is a psychological thriller, but it could also bog people down with detail. Having said that,... view book

This is very well written, I am shelving it because I hink it deserves a look by more decerning eyes. I wish you luck with it. I see no real mistakes, just perhaps a little more thought about what's being said as you slip into colloqualisms which aren't necessary to tell the story in some places. Th... view book

A gripping start, I'm hooked already. view book

I read to chapter eight where's the rest? Come on can't keeep you public waiting like that. Just joking. What I've read so far is pretty good. I like. Your on the watch list. view book