Wow, I really like how you've written each character. It feels as if each one has their own separate way in which you've written it, but they still seem to mesh well. The only one I felt could use some work was Roxxi's story. I don't know, but it just didn't feel as if it matched the others. Granted... view book

Wow, I don't usually read this type of book, but it just captivated me! There were some typos here and there, but other than that everything seems to be freaking great! There's humor, creepiness, and just about everything else needed to ensure this makes one helluva good story. view book

Hmm, your pitch is basically telling the whole story. I know there will be some twists and such, but too much information is already given away to hold onto the reader's interest. I kind of don't want to read it anymore because of that. You should fix that, maybe then I'll give it another try. No ha... view book

This really drew me in and makes me very eager for the next update....please update! view book