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Thanks to everyone on the site, (especially the LF40), for helping me improve my novels – The Benjamin Exhibition, and Denial.

I’ll only be an occasional visitor to the site over the next few months, as I am working on some new material. But I will be back.
In the meantime, please feel free to read and comment on my stuff.
Or - if you would like a break from reading, you can listen to a sample of my work. My short story, Steady Hands, has been recorded and is available free on www.listenupnorth.com - have a listen and tell me what you think.
contact: Simon@vdv.co.uk

favourite books

Waiting For The Barbarians
The Heart of the Matter
Bel Canto
The Crossing
Wolf Hall
Theft
The Old Man and the Sea
Engleby
The Shawshank Redemption
American Pastoral
The Man With The Golden Arm
Post Office
The Blind Assassin
Bonfire of the Vanities

etc - I'm not particular on style or theme - so long as it's good

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Denial

Simon Van der Velde

Charlie didn't mean to hurt her, but now his wife is dead, and he must do what is necessary to protect his children.


Charlie Marconi is an affable, educated, underachiever, a loving father, whose sense of self is based on the cast-iron certainty that he is a good man. Is it Charlie’s fault that he was once an abused child, that there is a poisonous rage bubbling beneath his gentle exterior, that, in a moment of misdirected anger, he murders his wife and dumps her body in the sea?

Charlie deals with the resultant guilt and fear the way he dealt with the pain of childhood, through a conscious act of denial. No one must ever know, because if no one knows, then it never happened.

But someone does know. Charlie’s daughter, Penny, sees something on the beach, but it is dark and she’s not quite sure. Penny too takes refuge in denial, but inadvertently drops hints to her dad.

Five months later the pressure is cranking up. Charlie is in conflict with his boss, the issue of what Penny knows remains unresolved, and he has a violent fight with his elder daughter, Eliza. This is when the police come to call.

Charlie’s great wall of self-deception is about to come tumbling down, leading us, finally, to the soul of Charlie Marconi.

 

The Benjamin Exhibition

Simon Van der Velde

Tommy Farrier grows up searching for his lost little brother in a brutal inner-city world of drugs and violence. He never, ever gives up.


Tommy is a confident, loving five-year-old until Mam's boyfriend, Daryl lashes out, and Tommy's brother, Benjy is taken away by social services. Tommy believes it is his fault, because he was a coward.

Tommy is isolated in his guilt, until ugly Annie Cherani moves into the street. Her emotional openness astonishes the suppressed Tommy, while her vulnerability appeals to the protector in him. They share their secrets, all but one. Tommy cannot talk about Benjy. This leads to a disastrous fight for which Tommy, again, blames himself. He loses Annie, as he lost Benjy.

At fifteen Tommy has a refreshingly cheeky wit, but at heart he is still a guilty outsider. He is beaten up by Carl Sears and his vicious sidekick, Frogga. WhenTommy's drunken mam lets him down again, a decade of accumulated anger finally overwhelms his guilt.

Cynical and alienated, Tommy finds Frogga in a bar and takes his revenge. Still flushed with violence, he sees Annie Cherani. Their reunion is wild and sensual, but Carl Sears is furious, and he’s closing in.

 

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You changed the title but the book itself still reads well. I really ....

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I wrote 183 days ago

Together apart - LF40 Review Ch 1 - I like the way you intersperse long sentences with short punchy ones, give a pacey rhythm to the story. On the other hand I felt Adam deciding to propose / reflecting on it took too long - without telling me much - I think it's a missed opportunity to put in mor... view book

I wrote 186 days ago

Sexual Obligations - clearly likely to connect more with women than me, but was good entertaining stuff, the odd cliche that needs rewording, but great lively real dialogue - that's what makes it work. Good stuff. Simon view book

I wrote 186 days ago

The Zero Line -ch4 - j kinkade review Mostly, I read lit. Fic. So this isn’t my genre – BUT - I think this is very good. The writing isn’t beautiful, but then I daresay it’s not meant to be. This is a thriller, all about the story. Ideally, the writing should be invisible, and in large parts it... view book

I wrote 197 days ago

Legacy – LF40 Review – ch1 –3 I like the voice – definite shades of Cormack McCarthy here. My first thought was that it’s interesting that he’s the weaker of the two characters – in fact – it’s much more interesting than that. The stronger, (his deceased brother – I think), one lives in his head.... view book

I wrote 197 days ago

Annie Franklin - just looked thru the pitch . The short pitch is dull. THe long pitch is very good, engagin, though it tails off towards the end. 'Journey full of' needs rephrasing, as does 'catches on to Annie's plight', and 'she catches on'. No doubt the two 'catches on' are deliberate, but fo... view book

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