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SRWENT

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I have a number of short stories and poetry that I have written and would like to get some feed-back. Maybe another book. Me and my family live in the Palm Springs area of California.

I'm working on the story and adding chapters. My editing or mechanics need work and I'm working on that too. So be patient with me. As of March 23 2012 chapters 1 to 7 have been edited and the rest to follow.

I'm open to all tags and will comment on if asked. I'm honest and will praise stories and, if I see a confusing line I will point them out too.

Aracelis came to me in a dream in 2002 and was very different when she visited me. Aracelis has gone over a number of changes too. I usually don't write novels, but this story is fun to write.


A special THANK YOU to Gretchen Steen for the cover and every thing else.

favourite books

One of my favorite writers is Zora Neal Hurston's "There eyes were watching God" (I fell in love with her writting because, she has the best dialog that places the reader in the action of the story) and other authors:
Ambrose Bierce: An Occurrence At Owl Creek Bridge
Andrew Dubus: Short stories
Walt Whitman: Leaves of Grass
Guy De Maupassant: Short stories
Tim Dorsey: all his books, Go Sergio
Emily Dickenson: her poetry
Edger Allen Poe: all
Anne Rule and a host of others too.

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ARACELIS

Richard A. Wentworth

Aracelis is a Time Weaver. However, when her sister is trapped, this event, forces her to travel to her Old World.


Aracelis is a skilled Time Weaver who travels through power and phone lines to help humans. She and the other Time Weavers whisper incredible ideas to humans, while they sleep, and help them solve complex problems.

One night, Aracelis visited Karen, while she slept, for a friendly introduction and Karen sees her, which never happens. Most Time Weavers visits leave people in a state of sleep confusion and they do not recall the event. Because, The Time Weaver's hypnotic powers make all the humans have fragmented dreams of wonder. But Karen has the uncanny ability to recall some of the dream.

However, Karen's fascinating dream becomes a reality and Karen's perspective of the world is heightened by new, life changing experiences. But, Karen's safe world is transformed when she is asked to travel with Aracelis to the Time Weavers OLD WORLD, for safety sakes, because arch-rival Arc, a Time Weaver too, who derives pleasure in driving people insane, wants Karen under her control.

 

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I wrote 5 days ago

I like your voice. I can see the action taking place, from the selling of the house to the family's interactions. Some parts made me laugh, I've read chapter 1 only, but can feel the vibe. So what to do, Keep a Journal and work--at writing, good call, get it out of your system and have a good laugh ... view book

I wrote 5 days ago

Hi Fatema; I have read the first chapter twice, and the second one last night. Over all, not sure what to say. I can see the poetry essence, sometimes the flow is broken but this one is origional and have not seen many like this one, THAT is why its hard to review. I under stand its your thoughts, i... view book

I wrote 31 days ago

Ziggy Stardust, I haven't heard that name in awhile, good old David Bowie, nice. view book

I wrote 31 days ago

"There was an awkward silence." Now for me I laughed, there should be more reaction. The list of what she wanted, not sure if you need, think about it, It works but... maybe a quick joke to get the reader laughing. The style is fast and doesn't drag, its up beat and the thought of being a late ... view book

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