Oh my goodness, this is hilarious. Although I am a little concerned, I answered yes to most of the 'are you gay questions'....well no, I hate Kenny G but I think that's the least of my problems. I now understand that I'm a gay man in a woman's body! Dammit! Your intro was hilarious and I bel... view book

I think this is a very unique idea for a story. The unique concept of hell, the riding of the elevator into the depths of earth, the receptionist who reads all the paperwork. Very unique. By the time I got to the sixth chapter tho, the build up was so long and vague, the view of hell wasn't real... view book

HI Dawn, Not sure if you're in the UK or not but you might want to try querrying Rosemary Canter of United Artists. She came and spoke in my school in Bath and one of the things she mentioned is that she's always on the lookout for the next great 'horse' story. She might like this. Cheers, A... view book

Not your typical greek story. I love the humor you've thrown in here. Fantastic. Your writing is solid and I really enjoy your dialogue. I love the last line of your second paragraph. It made me giggle. Shelved. view book

I really enjoyed your beginning. Lots of action to get us started. I had trouble figuring out which point of view to follow, you kinda had both going in the first few paragraphs and it's confusing. But other than that...great start. Good luck with this. Shelved. view book