David, I love love love the premise of your book, it was addictive and I can't wait until you post more. I'm back your book. I love reading and trying to understand the mind of sociopathic serial killers, it has always intrigued me. A few small issues I saw, In the first chapter, where it says Restr... view book

Hey Sandy, I feel like this version is much stronger than your original. Good job. I did see quite a few mistakes with grammer and with wrong tenses and awkward sentence structures. If you would like a critique on your first few chapter, message me and I can send you my email so you can forward me y... view book

Hey Sandy, I feel like this version is much stronger than your original. Good job. I did see quite a few mistakes with grammer and with wrong tenses and awkward sentence structures. If you would like a critique on your first few chapter, message me and I can send you my email so you can forward me y... view book

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Hey Katie, I love your book. If I could give you a few suggestions, your writing sounds more like a novel than a diary entry. I say that because you say, "I just heard a knock downstairs" in chapter five. I think you should say something along the lines of, "Just when I thought the tv show couldn't ... view book